Tuesday, February 7, 2012

The Fourth Verse of "Tempus Adest Floridum" (Latin)

Abstract
Translations
Vocabulary Boost
We've Made a Few...Changes
Closing

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Abstract

Well, just as the winter of the song has wrapped up so too does the song itself now wrap up. This entry marks the final verse of the song "Tempus Adest Floridum" (which you can read in its entirety, in Latin, here).

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Translations

So, here is my translation of verse four:

"The earth is ornamented by flowers and much beauty.
We dignify by death and certainly loving.
Therefore we rejoice in the pleasing time,
We praise and laud the Lord from the bottom of our hearts."

And the more metrical version:

"The earth is filled by flowers now, and with much beauty,
Death and love we now do dignify absolutely.
Thus in this pleasing season we now rejoice,
Praise and laud the lord with heart's voice."

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Vocabulary Boost

Having already worked through the previous three verses, this one gave me little trouble.

Aside from a few words that I added to my vocabulary (honestis-dignify, maybe root of the verb sense of honour; pectoris-heart, mind, breast~I had to look it up because I had confused it with peccator, meaning sin; and iucundo, meaning pleasing or delightful), there was little that caused difficulty.

But difficulty was still had.

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We've Made a Few...Changes

This time it came in the form of the last line of the verse. I know (and confirmed) that the suffix "que" means "and, both" and that sort of thing, but as far as I can tell there's no other verb present in the sentence. Thus, I just unpacked "laudemus," the result being "praise and laud." It might not do for the literal translation, but there is something there for the more liberal version, I think.

Speaking of the liberal version. A few changes were necessary throughout this verse to make the words more or less fit the melody and rhyme scheme. For example, "certainly" was replaced with "absolutely" in line two, and "voice" was subbed in for "depths" in line four. Replacing "time" with "season" is a little less egregious though - the two words are practically synonyms.

If you think otherwise, however, or have something that you want to suggest, correct, or just plain comment on, feel free to do so in the comments below.

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Closing

Since that wraps up "Tempus Adest Floridum," next week I'll post a full, metrical and rhyming version of the song, my own performance of it, and an introduction to the next text. And, of course, that's another thing that you can toss into a comment: a request for me to translate any text.

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